arevhat: (aeryn braid)
arevhat ([personal profile] arevhat) wrote2011-05-27 02:08 pm
Entry tags:

Fic: Blink

Title: Blink
Word Count: 219
Rated: PG
Fandom: Farscape
Setting: Pre-Premiere through Fetal Attraction.



Disclaimer: Farscape and its characters belong to the Jim Henson Co. and not to me.
Author's Note: Written for SC53 on Terra Firma, a "Small Things" challenge.


Blink


1. Beauty

She clutches handfuls of her mother: the warm, wounded flesh beneath her coat, the bittersweet curve of her mouth, the scar-swept surface of her cheek.

When she has grown older she will linger on the crinkles and creases that frame her own eyes, and smile in recognition.



2. Boundaries

He says, “You’re very pretty.”

There is something new about her, something borrowed, something blue. She sticks in his senses like candy floss; and while he knows it would be wrong to taste, he cannot help but see.



3. Conformity

When her brother sees her union tattoo, its bold, tribal lines peeking past the edges of her dress, he cries.

She doesn’t care. She’s always done what she wants, when she wants.



4. Temptation

The Peacekeeper leers at her, the packet dangling from between his teeth.

He shifts his body and it sticks to the moist, pink inside of his lip, then peels away. She tamps down her revulsion, her nausea.

Let the animal rut. She won’t die today.



5. Trust

She’s alone in the cargo container when she wakes, her body bruised, salted with sweat and the poisons of her people.

He’s left her a half-finished note in the grime, a tattered wad of currency in her clothes. She curls around herself, around his heartbeat, and waits.
 

[identity profile] olegscape.livejournal.com 2011-05-27 12:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Great job! I really enjoyed reading these. I like how you use words to convey a lot in very little, the images you’re creating. All characters feel very like themselves :)

[identity profile] nebari-rebel.livejournal.com 2011-05-27 02:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

[identity profile] nymeria-55.livejournal.com 2011-05-27 03:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Ohhh! What an apt title for these flash-stories!
If you blink, if you get distracted even for a microt... they're gone. And yet the feelings linger on, because they are too strong to fade.

Five wonderful pieces, but the first was to me the most powerful in all of its bittersweet taste.

*Outstanding* :)

[identity profile] nebari-rebel.livejournal.com 2011-05-30 04:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much, Nymeria *hugs*

[identity profile] john-scorpy.livejournal.com 2011-05-28 11:18 am (UTC)(link)
Oh wow, very beautiful. I like how you take inspiration from various separate small scenes :) I love Boundaries the most, because that's such an interesting scene and I think your interpretation is great ^^

[identity profile] nebari-rebel.livejournal.com 2011-05-30 04:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed them :) Most people seem to like Boundaries the most which pleases me - I think it's a scene that NEEDS an interpretation that isn't "Stark suddenly decides to perv on Aeryn while his true love is dying." So I'm really glad it works.

Conformity was the most fun to write because while it's meant to be canon Macton/Lo'Laan/D'Argo, I think it also reads as AU Nerri/Chi/D'Argo. I love believing that Lo'Laan and Chiana were more alike than different.

[identity profile] john-scorpy.livejournal.com 2011-05-30 07:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Whoa, I totally read it as Nerri/Chi/D'Argo! Now I see it the way you intended but itäs very interesting both ways :D