Aeryn/Chiana in 92 words

[arevhat]

Not even a microfic and a shifting POV but I wanted to write something today.



Chiana presses her lips to Aeryn’s, the other woman’s hips sharp against her palms. Her lips are cool, dry, and Chiana moistens them with quick little strokes of her tongue.

“Chiana,” Aeryn says. She turns her head but makes no move to leave, closes her eyes as Chiana’s tongue traces the line of her jaw to her throat. The Nebari’s breath is warm against her skin, her lips fastening on her pulse.

Aeryn feels her own name murmured against the curve of her neck, heavy with want, and pulls Chiana to her.

Comments

[officersun524.livejournal.com]

Well done. Like everyone else, I can see this pairing in some instances. I really don't think PKs are all that uptight about their pairings; there was just way too much sexual tension between Henta and Aeryn for me to believe they have a problem with it.

I definitely see Chiana as open to all options. Aeryn herself...well, I think it depends on the situation. Now, if you think you might expand the fic, I vote for it to be Aeryn's dream and she decides to do something about it. As for motivation for Aeryn...I think she'd be at the lowest of low points. When she comes back to Moya after the talyn thing, she's really kind of all alone...

In case you were asking or wondering... :-) I could always mind my own business too.